song, I
think of leaving you
standing in the station while
outside my window a
bald eagle’s nest in a dead
cypress tree didn't amaze me
a tenth as much as your tenacity
but it’s strength reminded me
of you so with cloudy eyes I had
to leave my seat and pace the gently
rocking aisles because my entire being
wanted to be with you
again in the kitchen watching you
mix up potato salad and stir the gumbo
and, later, watching a marathon of
Chopped on TV.
Something we’ll never do together
ever
again.
standing in the station while
outside my window a
bald eagle’s nest in a dead
cypress tree didn't amaze me
a tenth as much as your tenacity
but it’s strength reminded me
of you so with cloudy eyes I had
to leave my seat and pace the gently
rocking aisles because my entire being
wanted to be with you
again in the kitchen watching you
mix up potato salad and stir the gumbo
and, later, watching a marathon of
Chopped on TV.
Something we’ll never do together
ever
again.
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Charlotte Hamrick lives in New Orleans where she often scribbles words and phrases in notebooks that later becomes poetry. She is a Pushcart Prize nominee whose work has been published in Metazen, The Dead Mule School of Southern Literature, St. Somewhere Journal and other literary magazines. She likes dark chocolate, dogs and people who listen - in that order. Her original poetry and other occasional writing can be found on her website, Zouxzoux.
3 comments:
Wow ....
The style of this piece and the rhythm is stilted like tears... simple and sad ... a beautiful poem encapsulating the urge to run back even tho they are now apart.
I really like this piece.. It has a musicality that is haunting...
Thank you both so much - I really appreciate your comments.
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